Wednesday, June 6, 2012

My Warrior cats story................







As Dawnkit opened her eyes for the first time, She saw a pair of blue eyes stare into hers. She squeaked and nuzzled her mothers side. The small kit's black and brown fur shimmered as the sun hit it. Dawnkit squeaked again and nuzzled closer to her mother. Suddenly, a black shape brushed up against her fur and squeaked. It was her brother, Nightkit. The two kits cuddled together while their mother slept. Then, a big brown shape barged into the den. Muscles rippled under the brown shaped huge body. It was a tom. "Hello Mudfoot." Their mother said. "Dawnkit has opened her eyes for the first time. Her eyes are a beautiful amber color, just like yours." The brown tom purred and nuzzled Dawnkit's mother, whose name was Tawnytail. When Dawnkit awoke again, she felt for her brother but his familiar black shape wasn't there. Dawnkit got up and stretched her black and brown legs. Before the kit snuck out of the den, she checked to see if Tawnytail was sleeping. Sure enough, The gray queen was snoring. Dawnkit snuck out of the den and saw the brilliant sunlight for the first time. Dawnkit felt the warm sun on her fur and purred. Suddenly, a black shape crashed into her. Dawnkit somersaulted across the ground and leaped to her small paws. The shape crashed into her again. Dawnkit dodged it clumsily and lost her balance. "I win!" said the familiar voice of Nightkit. Dawnkit scrambled to her paws. "I didn't even know this was a game!" Nightkit purred and nuzzled his sister. "I didn't hurt you, did I?" he asked, his eyes anxious. "Not a scratch!" Dawnkit squeaked. Nightkit pounced on Dawnkit again and the two kits pounced and hissed at eachother, pretending to be real warriors. Then, an enormous brown paw thudded right infront of Nightkit's nose. He scrambled back to Dawnkit. The little she-kit looked up to see Mudfoot standing before them. "Get in the nursery!" He hissed. The two kits ran back to their den, tails stuck straight up in the air. Inside, Tawnytail was awake and looking around, worry flooding her eyes. "There you are!" the gray queen cried. The two guilty kits slumped over to their mother. Mudfoot stepped inside. "It sounded like Shadowclan was attacking outside. When I got out of the warriors den, they were rolling around on the ground. Tawnytail narrowed her eyes. "Only ask me when you want to go play outside." She scolded. "You are now staying in here for the rest of the day. Dawnkit and Nightkit moaned and slumped over next to their mother and closed their eyes. They soon went to sleep.





This is only just Chapter one............

I like the name The Second Warrior for this story..
Don't you?



Dawnkit of Iceclan

Nightkit of Iceclan

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